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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
Well constructed, will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:23, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
- Section 1; Consistency maintained, all the parameters—Displacement, Length, Beam, Draft, Power, Propulsion, Speed, Armament and armor—seem fine. Conversion templates and links in right place.
- Section 2; para 1; Remove the dup-link of "Royal Navy"
- Section 2; para 1; Link "President of South Africa"
- Section 2; para 1; Is the name of wife of the Navy Chief of Staff, Rear-Admiral Hugo Biermann, available?
- Section 2; para 1; "with Captain M.R. Terry-Lloyd was in command" -> "with Captain M.R. Terry-Lloyd in command"
- Section 2; para 2; Link "Argentina"
- Section 2; para 3; Why is "Dreadnought" mentioned in italics?
- All ship names are italicized.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:49, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
- Section 2; para 3; Remove the dup-link of "Canary Islands"
- Section 2; para 3; "New York City" was linked twice in the para.
- Section 2; para 3; Remove the dup-link of "corvettes"
- Section 2; para 3; Change 1979–80 to 1979–1980 per MOS:DATERANGE
- Section 2.2.1; What is "PWO"? Never defined in the previous para
- External link check shows one dead link (saafmuseum.org.za).
- Deleted.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:49, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 12:42, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Sturmvogel 66: Any update on this? Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:35, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
Sorry for the lengthy delay. All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:49, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 12:48, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: