Talk:SMS Kronprinz Erzherzog Rudolf/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 02:43, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:43, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

• No DABs.
• but she remained in the Yugoslav howzabout "only" after "she"?
  • How about "for only three years"?
• fix the license tag for File:Schiff sms kronprinz erzh rudolf.JPG and add a US tag for File:Eskadermanöver in Kiel (Alexander Kirchner, 1890).jpg
  • Replaced the first with an actual photo of the ship, and added the tag for the second.
• In the infobox put hyphens in fire-tube boiler and triple-expansion steam engine
  • Done
• Link the center battery ship and the term is usually central-battery ship. And ironclad frigate, electrical generators, deck, laid down, launched, commander
  • Linked all, but I believe "central battery ship" is a British term.
• Explain landing gun.
  • See if what I added works.
• Torpedo tubes, above water or submerged?
  • Don't know, Conway's doesn't say.
• forward bulkhead 242 mm (9.5 in) and the aft bulkhead 203 mm (8.0 in) "Thick" needs to be in here somewhere.
  • Fixed
• She was launched on 6 July 1887 and thereafter undergoing fitting out, which was completed in September 1889 This is awkward.
  • Reworded, see if that works
• German emperor capitalize emperor.
  • I don't think it should be capitalized if it's not used as his title.
• She remained for the duration of the conflict I think a "there" belongs here somewhere.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:22, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Good catch.