Talk:SS Empire Simba/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

Good job on these two articles. The same issues can be seen on both. For one, I would like to see the prose referenced. Also, I would like to see a stub made on both shipbuilding companies. Other than that, these articles look in much better shape than the one that you rushed previously. ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 17:36, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Also, keep this in mind: Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 200 tons, use 200 tons, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 200 tons.ṜέđṃάяķvюĨїήīṣŢ Drop me a line 17:39, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
The lead is not cited per WP:LEADCITE and ample precedent. Quantities and units generated by {{convert}} have the non-breaking space inserted automatically. For others, I don't use the  , but instead a keyboard entered hard space " " (option + space bar on a Mac). — Bellhalla (talk) 20:43, 25 September 2008 (UTC)