Talk:Sadie Harris/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 06:26, 22 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unlink fictional character per WP:OVERLINK
- Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"series' producer" isn't it "series creator". Also, with the '.
- She is also a producer. I chose the word 'producer' because if I said "the character was created by series creator" it would sound redundant. I don't know what you mean by "with '."

"Harris and Meredith give each other nicknames; "Die" and "Death" respectively." citation/reference needed
- Per WP:TVPLOT, the episode is the reference. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The surgery goes wrong however and Harris' life is seriously endangered, though fortunately she is rescued by the residents." citation/reference needed
- Per WP:TVPLOT, the episode is the reference. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"Some time" isn't needed
- Done, reworded. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"claims responsibility for the appendectomy". Awkward
- Done, rephrased. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Meredith should be Grey, as per WP:MOS. Same for various others
- Meredith and Lexie share the same last name, which is why they are referred to by first name throughout the article. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Link Europe
- Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

you really don't - that's the rule in this town." after don't should be an en-dash rather than a regular -.
- Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Too many "of" in the "Characterization" section. Consider re-prashing. Eg: "Writing for Entertainment Weekly, Michael Ausiello"
- Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add link to the Grey's Anatomy Wiki episode link.
- Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 03:34, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Remove ABC Grey's Anatomy link. This is about the character, not the show
- Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 03:34, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will finish the rest later tonight. For now this is it. TBran dl ey 00:42, 24 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]