Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 06:26, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• The Daily Mail citation should be removed per Wikipedia:DAILYMAIL as it is an banned source
  • Replaced w/ The Telegraph source Kees08 (Talk)

Background

• Wikilink opening to the 2012 Summer Olympics opening ceremony and closing to the 2012 Summer Olympics closing ceremony
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• You use Saint Kitts and Nevis and St. Kitts and Nevis throughout the article. Only one of these should be used for consistency
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Athletics

• All mentions of"100 m" and its variants need to be spelt as for example "100 metres" in the prose
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "He was disqualified during the semifinals heat." - Is there any information available to state why he was disqualified? Was it a false start?
  • I checked harder this time and still did not find anything. I was even looking for videos of the event to see if I could figure it out. Do you have any source on it by chance? Kees08 (Talk)
• "which was not high enough to advance to the next round" - change to which was not fast enough to advance them to the next round
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "and it was announced July 29 that she would not compete" - reword to and it was announced on July 29 that she would not compete
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Wikilink the World Anti-Doping Agency
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "While the drug is not listed as prohibited by the World Anti-Doping Agency, it falls into the category of veterinary medicine and is therefore prohibited." - repition of prohibited
  • Better? Kees08 (Talk)

References

• The reflist needs to have a colwidth set at 30em
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• The publishers of the citations need to be wikilinked where possible
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Remove the external links section as it is not appropriate to have just solely the navbox inside of it
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Can see the GA potential in this but it will be put on hold until all of the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 13:52, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

• @MWright96: I have made an attempt to address all of your concerns, let me know if I missed anything or if you have any replies to anything I noticed above. Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 07:22, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
  • @Kees08: With regards to the DSQ claim, I couldn't find anything to say what Adams did to warrant himself disqualification in his event. Nevertheless, this article is now at GA class. MWright96 (talk) 16:42, 24 October 2017 (UTC)