Talk:Shelley Chaplin/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments quick ones, many of which I've said before....

  • Please see other similar reviews:
    • En-dashes.
      • AFAIK, they are all correct now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
    • Starting paras with surname rather than She.
    • Repetitive "she" in sentences (see Personal, five in a row...)
    • WP:LEAD, four paras is too much for a short article.
      • Reduced to two paragraphs. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
    • Captions (incomplete sentences don't need a full stop).
      • This is already the case. The only stops are in the one on the guernsey, which is two complete sentences. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
  • "Gliders team mate Bridie Kean attended her graduation.[6]" trivial.
  • What's the point of abbreviated DAS if you don't use it?
  • "Women's Wheelchair basketball" or "Women's wheelchair basketball" (infobox).
  • "against Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team" do you mean "against Germany"?
    • It's awkward, but for some reason is the way that Wikipedia names thing. Deleted sentence. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:03, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Ref 6 looks odd.
    • Corrected. An artifact of HTML Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Ref 16 "Services — University of" should be an en-dash, not an em-dash.

I'll put it on hold for a few days, and I would also ask you to fix up the remaining GANs you've mass-nominated with these common problems. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:41, 6 September 2013 (UTC)

All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:03, 6 September 2013 (UTC)

Further

  • I don't understand "Chaplin competed with the Gliders at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. In the gold medal game against Germany at the 2012 Summer Paralympics".
    • Deleted second sentence. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:50, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Why link Oz at the 2012 Paralympics second time round?
    • Removed duplicated links with the link tool
  • Stat table headings need en-dashes.
    • Added ndashes
  • Ref col shouldn't be sortable.
    • Made table non-sortable
  • FTM-A col doesn't sort correctly.
    • Made table non-sortable
  • Nor does FGM-A.
    • Made table non-sortable
  • Two seasons in that table appear to be grey, the other three not. Why?
    • Made table non-sortable

The Rambling Man (talk) 15:58, 13 September 2013 (UTC)

All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:50, 13 September 2013 (UTC)