Talk:Shocker (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 19:42, 8 October 2016 (UTC)

I'll review this, even if the first wrestler that came to mind was someone else entirely. Wizardman 19:42, 8 October 2016 (UTC)

• Yes sadly this guy never had a cool GI Joe figure create for him.  MPJ-DK  14:11, 9 October 2016 (UTC)

Almost forgot about this; here's what I found:

• Would Ruben Soria be worth linking in the lead? Would have myself but A. wanted to be sure of notability, and B. the current article is on a footballer.
  • I don't think so, he is not really that notable as a wrestler, mainly for being "Shocker's father" so I don't think he'd meet the notability criteria.
• "The two later had the championship taken away from when " from them when.
  • Fixed
• ("The Hansom Ones") I assume The Handsome Ones was meant here, or was that actually spelled as such?
  • Fixed
• "Terrible's replacement, Alan Stone, did not meet expectations and Los Guapos was effectively ended soon after." maybe im going nitpicky, but do we mean kayfabe or on the real end of things, or a mix of both? I'm presuming in-ring is meant, just want to be sure i'm understanding.
  • Reworded to be more clear and factua,
• " one of Shocker's match." Shocker's matches.
  • Fixed
• The CMLL second section should probably be split into two paragraphs, it's a bit on the long side.
  • Fixed
• Just because i should ask, any news or matches in 2016?
  • He was injured for most of the first half of 2016 but there are notable matches since then I am sure, I will do a little research, grab some sources and add in a little more info.
  • Wizardman and I've added in some 2016 info with sources. I believe that addressess all concerns.  MPJ-DK  02:21, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

Overall in pretty good shape, article's on hold and will be passed when fixed. Wizardman 23:41, 14 October 2016 (UTC)

• Thank you for your feedback.  MPJ-DK  02:06, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 17:09, 15 October 2016 (UTC)