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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 05:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Grabbing this. Always a pleasure to review your articles. Will have notes out tomorrow, assuming my computer doesn't break again. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 05:13, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 12:55, 18 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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-What does this quote mean?
Reinventing the wheel, suggesting she thinks the burgers and shakes are optimal. ---Another Believer (Talk) 13:48, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: Not that many discrete issues, but a few systemic ones. Page suffers from WP:PROMOTION to the point of reading like an advertisement and WP:QUOTEFARM. While I understand that the Reception section can have a bunch of quotes, the Description and History section suffer from overuse. I also made a few grammatical CEs, please review when able. Placing on hold for now. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 04:38, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Etriusus I've tried addressing your concerns. Please let me know if you think more is necessary for GA status. Thank you for reviewing! --Another Believer (Talk) 14:01, 19 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for being patient, had some stuff in my personal life to take care of. I made some last-minute changes that I can see you've already acknowledged. All-in-all, thank you for making this an easy review, congrats on yet another GA!!! 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 02:01, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
🏵️Etrius ( Us) 02:01, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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