Talk:So Seductive/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):
   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):
   b (citations to reliable sources):
   c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):
   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• No issues

Lead

• "So Seductive" is a song by American rapper Tony Yayo... → Make the sentence end there to comply with WP:BEGINNING Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
• ...reaching number 48 on the US Billboard Hot 100:... → Add semi-colon at the end of this Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Background

• ...of 50 Cent's album Get Rich or Die Tryin'... → Add year of release for "Get Rich or Die Tryin'" Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
• The group also released their debut album, Beg for Mercy... → Add year of release for "Beg for Mercy" Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
• ...which involved wearing "Free Yayo" shirts advertising his situation... → Add semi-colon at the end of this Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
• ...after receiving a call from the Shady Records offices advising him to do so:[4] → At semi-colon at end Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
• ...titled Thoughts of a Predicate Felon, almost immediately after leaving prison... → Put year of release for album in parentheses Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Writing and composition

• According to WP:SAMPLE, an audio recording has to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 21 seconds and is currently 23 seconds) Done (shortened to 19 seconds) I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 15:30, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception

• No issues

Music video

• No issues

Live performances

• No issues

Awards and nominations

• Get rid of this section, but put information in prose form in "Critical reception" section Done I Am Rufus • Conversation is a beautiful thing. 08:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Track listing

• No issues

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts

• No issues

Radio and release history

• No issues

References

• No issues

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues among others that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status, until a consensus is reached. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 06:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)

Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel comfortable passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 17:45, 22 June 2012 (UTC)