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GA Review

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this article. This is my first bio GAN I review, and I would love to learn many things from this decision. GeraldWL 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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 Done and lead expanded. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Military career

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 Done except for the 3rd paragraph; citation 1 and 2 is reinforcing each other regarding the dates and fact. --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Trenggalek to Trenggalih

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 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Parasamya Purnakarya Nugraha

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 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy

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 Done --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

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 Done Removed redlinks. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 00:48, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Governor of Irian Jaya

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 Done except point 1, as it is already linked in the lead. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Irian Jaya earthquake

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 Done Ah, my apologies. The X Valley was without name prior to the 2000s; it is now known as the Baliem Valley. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 12:35, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Jeromi Mikhael, last thing: in paragraph 3, ref 31 and 27 is used at the same time. Similar case at "Death", last sentence. Mind relocating or removing one of them, if appropriate? GeraldWL 12:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 13:01, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Jeromi Mikhael, in my opinon this has passed the GA criteria. Congrats! GeraldWL 13:03, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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Gerald Waldo Luis, I've done what you requested. Please check. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael (marhata) 14:29, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Jeromi Mikhael, see "Irian Jaya earthquake" above. After that is resolved, I'll do a linking copyedit, and that should make it for a good article. Apologies for the wait. GeraldWL 09:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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