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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:28, 13 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]


A few comments from me:

  • worth mentioning that the Vauquelin class were commissioned in the early 1930s
  • Done
  • Corrected. This was left over from before I expanded the section.
  • was the initial full name Sergo Ordzhonikidze? This is a bit confusing, as it is later said that she was renamed Sergo Ordzhonikidze?
  • perhaps link Flotilla leader is that is what she was?
  • "to the former" it might be worth clarifying that this was the Northern Fleet
  • "although Razyaryonny's propeller"

more to come Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:28, 13 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • I assume Whitley does not have anything unique to say about her?
This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:05, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]