Talk:Squatting in Albania/GA3

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 01:22, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Good to see you once again Mujinga! I will be reviewing this later tonight. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 01:22, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
This was very fascinating! Great to see some more work on squatting-related articles from you :) I will put the article on hold for now but this should not take long; it is fairly short, but sweet! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns fully so that I can know when to respond. If you wish to respectfully disagree with any of my points please do so—I reckon we can work it out. 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 01:55, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi LunaEatsTuna thanks for picking this one up! Mujinga (talk) 13:21, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@LunaEatsTuna: cheers for the helpful suggestions, I hope I have answered everything to your satisfaction Mujinga (talk) 15:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Great! I am happy to pass this for GA status now. Thanks for the fast response and congrats! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 19:16, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

Earwig says this article is good to go.

Files

All images relevant. Actually, not just relevant but very good!

File:Albania (orthographic projection).svg: okay, released in the public domain
File:VILLA OF THE FORMER ‘RADIO TIRANA’.jpg (sorry for yelling): license okay, uploaded to commons by photographer
File:Durres train station slum.JPG: license okay, uploaded to commons by photographer

Text

"Bathore near to Tirana had 40,000 squatters by the early 2000s." → "The area of Bathore, just outside Tirana, had 40,000 squatters by the early 2000s." Flows better in my opinion.

I'll come back to that one, always like to do the lead last Mujinga (talk) 13:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

rejigged and expanded lead slightly Mujinga (talk) 14:53, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"immediately outlawed private title to land on coming to power". As a reader unfamiliar with property jargon, this confused me at first. Is it possible to rephrase it a little bit or wiki link it to something?

Good point, rephrased and added link to land title Mujinga (talk) 13:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"Catholic organisations have bought up land specifically to house Catholic squatters." This sentence is in present-tense while the previous and succeeding sentences are both in past-tense. Are Catholic organisations presently buying land for this reason? If so, this sentence feels slightly out of place.

I see what you mean, rejigged Mujinga (talk) 13:29, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"the government then pledged to meet all ten demands of the squatters except the one requesting a hospital." Maybe mention in a previous sentence what some of these ten demands were if possible?

rejigged and mentioned amenities - the ten demands aren't all listed but it's about things like a legal connection to electricity, water and sanitation Mujinga (talk) 14:20, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"The Agency of Legalization, Upgrading, and Integration of Informal Zones and Buildings (ALUIZNI) was founded" when?

2006, added Mujinga (talk) 14:13, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"country-wide" how about "nationwide"?

sure! Mujinga (talk) 13:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

The references are almost all okay and support the article's content. Verified refs 3 and 9 from excerpts from Google Books; accepting refs 4, 7 and 11 (which I do not have access to) in good faith.

Ref 2 does not have a date. - fixed Mujinga (talk) 14:09, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 8's doi is no longer working it seems.. - strange, fixed by adding website insteadMujinga (talk) 14:09, 25 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]