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Reviewer: Shushugah (talk · contribs) 16:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. I've directly fixed a few grammatical mistakes, but they're few/minor.
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. The structure is chronological and reasonable, with further readings below reference/see also sections.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Indeed.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). Yes. In general, all the sources are high quality, with a number of books, and several newspaper articles.
2c. it contains no original research. None that I could find.
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
7. Overall assessment.

General comments:

  • Wikilink Volxkuche
  • Properly attribute the two authors Karl-Heinz Dellwo and Willi Baerof the book "Wir wollen alles – Die Hausbesetzungen in Hamburg" with their names instead of "Various"
  • Legalized is a technical/legal concept that is mentioned several times, but not explained.
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It passes copyvio check. Because it's a translated article, I also checked whether attribution was provided. While this article is quite different from the German one, it is a derivative, using same images/sources in various cases. This would be fixed with a talk page template {{Translated page}}. Further instructions available at Help:Translate.

I will give a week before I mark it as succeeded/failed, unless you're actively working on it, in which case I will give more time to address my feedback. Looking forward to working with you! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 16:36, 1 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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