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GA review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:10, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Overall, it's almost there. The first section could use a reflow to make the paragraphs less choppy, and there are two minor comma items, one minor reference item (and a suggestion), and alt text on the image. @Bsoyka: 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 17:30, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Copy changes

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  • holiday season, but - remove comma
     Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • November 29, 1940 at - MOS:DATECOMMA needed
     Done: Diff. Bsoyka (talk) 19:54, 10 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • A lot of choppy one- or two-sentence paragraphs in "20th century" header
     Fixed: Combined some of them together, hopefully flows better now. Bsoyka (talk) 02:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Other

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Review in progress