Talk:Starky's/Archive 1
Sources
[edit]---Another Believer (Talk) 17:40, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:17, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Please remove any unused parameters that will likely never be used
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:52, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
- Link "restaurant" please
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:52, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Link "restaurant" please
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:52, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
- The lead is quite short for a GA article; do you think you could add on to it a bit?
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:43, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Description and history
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- "Starky's was known for its patio and outdoor seating and served American cuisine, including burgers and steak.[6]" --> "Starky's was known for its patio and outdoor seating, in addition to serving American cuisine, including burgers and steak.[6]"
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:51, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Events
[edit]- The first sentence is quite long; could you reword it?
- Split. ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:26, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]- You could add a lead-in sentence to this section, stating whether or not the restaurant received positive or negative reviews; from the looks of it, it's positive (and known for their Bloody Mary's).
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:32, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
Other notes
[edit]- Is the "1935 establishments in Oregon" category really necessary since the one for 1984 is included? It wasn't actually Starky's in 1935...
- Removed. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:50, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
End of GA Review:
[edit]Another great article. On hold for seven days; I like these types of articles. Thanks! Carbrera (talk) 02:37, 18 June 2016 (UTC).
- I think I've addressed your concerns, but let me know otherwise. Thanks again for your time and assistance. I am curious, what do you mean by "these types of articles"? My favorite article to write are usually about specific, more obscure, and usually local topics. ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:44, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
- Haha, by "these types of articles", I mean local attractions, restaurants, nightclubs, etc. I've been wanting to do the same thing with my hometown, as it is quite small and full of historic buildings. Also, a neighbor of mine wrote a book about the history of my town, which I've been meaning to purchase from him. We'll see. Hit me up if you ever need me to review another article! I will be passing this one by the way; thanks! Carbrera (talk) 20:44, 18 June 2016 (UTC).
- Awesome. Writing about local culture is my favorite. Thanks again for taking time to review this article! ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:24, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
- Haha, by "these types of articles", I mean local attractions, restaurants, nightclubs, etc. I've been wanting to do the same thing with my hometown, as it is quite small and full of historic buildings. Also, a neighbor of mine wrote a book about the history of my town, which I've been meaning to purchase from him. We'll see. Hit me up if you ever need me to review another article! I will be passing this one by the way; thanks! Carbrera (talk) 20:44, 18 June 2016 (UTC).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.