Talk:Stone Sour (album)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Article content[edit]
- Lead
It was recorded produced by the band… Was the album record or produced by the band, or both?The first paragraph is quite short, with only two sentences. I'd suggest expanding it or combining paragraphs.After producing some demos… Demos for which band, Stone Sour or Slipknot?Make sure to avoid contractions in the article unless from a direct quote. "Hadn't" was the first one to appear in the lead.
- History
The duo wrote 14 songs and began working in a studio on some demos. Is there an approximate amount of demos they recorded?
- Promotion
"Get Inside" was the band's first music video to include live footage. Considering this song was the band's first music video, what makes the inclusion of live footage notable?…a DVD which featured all three music videos which were produced for the album… This part of the sentence is a bit… odd. It can do without the "which were produced for the album".The message of "Bother" did not differ from Slipknot tracks "it's just presented in an utterly different musical vein," wrote Blabbermouth.net reviewer Don Kaye. At first, I thought this was a POV/OR sentence. It should be noted that Kaye felt that "Bother" didn't differ from Slipknot's songs.
- Reception
Most reviewers offered some comparison to that of vocalist Taylor and guitarist Root's more famous band Slipknot. Text in bold is POV.While Rowan Shaeffer states that… Shaeffer seems to pop out of no where. Include which publication he is writing for.Another contraction: "wouldn't".While NY Rock stated that the album has a… "While" shouldn't really begin the sentence. Also, should NY Rock be italicized? In the infobox it is, but not in the article body.
Media review[edit]
- Everything seems to check out okay.
General comments[edit]
I'm placing the article on hold for seven days to allow for the above concerns to be addressed. Additional comments may be made afterward. — Σxplicit 00:18, 13 May 2009 (UTC)