Talk:Stranger in a Strange Land (Barbra Streisand song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 23:26, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
- Grabbing this for a review if that is okay with you. Aoba47 (talk) 23:26, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- For this part “It serves as the first of eleven reunion collaborations with Barry Gibb”, I would use 11 rather than eleven.
- For this part “the music video was released for streaming”, do you think that a link for “streaming” would be helpful?
- I am uncertain about the placement of this sentence (The composition is essentially a pop song and contains lyrics referencing individuals who have lost a loved one due to war.). It currently is placed after information on the video, but it is a little confusing to snap back into information on the song after reading sentences on the video.
- You mention that the song was released as a digital download in the infobox, but not in the lead.
- Background and release
- For the part “on each of the album’s eleven songs”, I would use 11 rather than eleven.
- I would mention here that a digital download of the song was also released.
- Do you think that adding a link for streaming would be helpful?
- Barry Gibb is linked twice in this section.
- By “TV Spots”, do you mean advertisements? If so, then I think you can just paraphrase rather than use the quote.
- Rather than “singing the song”, I think “performing the song” would work better to avoid repetition.
- Composition and lyrics
- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Titles#Major works, AllMusic should be italicized. (I just found this out recently, and I did not know it myself either).
- For this sentence (A pop track, Stephen Thomas Erlewine from AllMusic wrote that "Stranger in a Strange Land" serves as one of Barry Gibb's many attempts to "update his signature sound" on Guilty Pleasures.), the structure is off. In its current phrasing, the part “A pop track” is joined to “Stephen Thomas Erlewine” so you are calling him a “pop track”. Not the worst insult in the world, but it still should be fixed lol.
- Would a link for chorus be helpful?
- Reception
- I do not believe that the "background contributions” quote is needed. I think you can paraphrase this.
- AllMusic should be in italics.
- For this part (and on album tracks "Night of My Life" and “Hideaway"), I would clarify that “Night of My Life” is a single and “Hideaway” is an album track.
- Track listings and formats
- Great work here
- Charts
- Wonderful work here
- References
- No issues here; I would suggest that you archive your links though to avoid link rot and death.
- Final thoughts
- Great work as always! I will promote this to a GA once my comments are addressed. Aoba47 (talk) 00:05, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- Aoba47 – Thank you for the review. I believe I addressed all of your issues. Do you know how to archive all the links at once instead of individually? That's my only question at the moment. Thanks, Carbrera (talk) 02:17, 15 January 2018 (UTC).
- Thank you for addressing everything. I will ✓ Pass this. You can use this tool to archive all references on a single page at once here. Hope this helps (I use it a lot and it works well for me). Aoba47 (talk) 03:06, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
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