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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:55, 2 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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  • You could probably be a bit more descriptive in the "alt" for the album cover image
  •  Done
  • "Suavemente" (the single) was released on April 4, 1998
  •  Done
  • I understand that some red links on Wikipedia are okay, but since they are the only two in the article, I'd remove the links for "Luna Llena" and "Nuestra Canción"
  • I will be creating those articles shortly.

Lead

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  • Link Billboard for the first time please to the article "Billboard (magazine)"
  • It is linked?
  • In all cases: U.S. --> US
  •  Done

Background

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  • Insert a comma after "In 1996" please
  •  Done

Release and promotion

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  • In all cases: U.S. --> US
  •  Done
  • Insert a comma after "On November 28" please
  •  Done
  • Rest is absolutely great! Very informative
  • Thank you

Reception

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  • Link "AllMusic" in the "Review scores" box please
  •  Done

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  • And, Terry Jenkins' AllMusic review is quite short (and even though the actual review is equally short), you could probably state what tracks he highlighted, since he seems to list quite a few in his review
  • Added about the mode tune AllMusic listed.

Chart history

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  • In all cases: U.S. --> US
  •  Done

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  • Insert a comma after "During its fifth straight week atop the Tropical Albums" please
  •  Done

Singles

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  • "U.S. Billboard Hot 100 chart..." --> "US Billboard Hot 100 chart..."
  •  Done

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  • "U.S. radio stations..." --> "US radio stations..."
  •  Done

Paragraph 3

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  • Again, I don't know if you need to the link to two non-existent singles' articles... What do you think?
  • Although this section is quite informative, it is quite long for an album page, and is usually combined with the "Promotion" section; not like there's a problem with this or anything
  • If you feel as though it is too long then I'll trim it if that's an issue?

Impact

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  • In all cases: U.S. --> US
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  • Last sentence reworded as "The lead single also became a popular tune in Mexico, where it was used in festivals around the country.[66]" please
  •  Done

Track listing

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  • The "Producer(s)" column is completely empty? I don't know if this was a mistake, or...???
  •  Done
  • The "Producer(s)" column is still empty; rest is fine
  • Any other editions of the album?
  • There are details about the international releases of the album in the 'release' section.
  • Is the writer for "Princesita" really unknown??
  • AllMusic didn't know, but I have the CD and I added the composer.

Charts

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Chart positions

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  • The "US Billboard 200" should be the first chart listed here
  •  Done

Other notes

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  • Is there a "Credits and personnel" section that you could add?
  •  Done
  • Also, please add a "Release history" section to the article as well
  • You could add an "External links" section that includes a link to the master copy of the album's "Discogs" page
  •  Done
  • Add "Category:1998 albums" to the list of categories please
  •  Done

End of GA Review:

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Another great article from you! I hope to continue reviewing your articles! Meanwhile, this article will be on hold for seven days to allow for changes and any comments/suggestions to be made. Good luck and cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:45, 12 June 2016 (UTC)![reply]

Thanks for your kind words, I have since fixed all issues you pointed out. Thanks again for your review, – jona 13:08, 12 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]