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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:05, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:

Lead
  • recorded by the American -> recorded by American
  •  Done
  • available as -> available as a
  •  Done
  • cassette single, and -> cassette single and
  • 1997 by -> 1997 through
  •  Done
  • the breakup -> their breakup
  •  Done
  • The song was written -> you've already used "song"
  •  Done
  • with one calling -> with one of them calling
  •  Done
  • peaking in the -> peaking within the
  •  Done
  • certified gold -> certified Gold
  • Gold does not need to be capitalized
Background and recording
  • Young, and musician -> Young and musician
  • Serial comma
  • Who is Angle
  • Gary Angle proceeds the sentence
  • officials, and had -> officials and had
  • Serial comma
  • band, and -> band and
  • Serial comma
  • when he did -> when he did so
  •  Done
  • more and more songs -> several songs
  •  Done
  • then his girlfriend -> his then-girlfriend
Composition
  • Flawless
Critical reception
  • Bleach from his -> Bleach, writing for
  • blog also enjoyed -> blog, also enjoyed
  • single... From -> single. [...] From
Commercial performance
  • successful, charting -> successful, with it charting
  • US -> United States
  • Try to not use "song" every time
  • certified gold -> certified Gold
  • Like I said, this would be incorrect
  • at positions -> at number
  • well, peaking -> well, with it peaking
  • the UK -> the United Kingdom
  • and number -> and at number
Music video
  • The song's music video -> An accompanying music video for the song
  • Remove "sometime"
  • band, after -> band, following
  • video opens -> video commences
  • ex-lover (Terry Hall) walks -> ex-lover, Terry Hall, walks
  • with the ex-lover -> with Hall
Credits and personnel
  • Credits and personnel adapted from the Tragic Kingdom liner notes. -> Credits adapted from the liner notes of Tragic Kingdom
  • cover art -> photography
Release history
  • Unlink formats and label
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