Talk:Tạ Phong Tần/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:28, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 15:28, 3 August 2013 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "When she began to blog, Ta Phong Tan still worked as a policewoman." Since it's the first sentence, the word still is offputting; remove, or give a bit more detail on when she started her police career if that info exists.
- The article feels quite quote-heavy to me. Some are fine, but there are a few that can be worked around. Given the size of the article there shouldn't be as many as there are.
Just those couple minor points; article on hold. Wizardman 17:15, 4 August 2013 (UTC)