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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 18:40, 16 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • "Jack later tells Kate that the past does not matter, they all died when the plane crashed." --> what?
  • "decides to end the marshal's misery by shooting him in the heart." --> remove the verbose. I think it's best to say "decides to kill the Marshal by shooting him in the heart" or something.
  • "He misses and punctures the marshal's lung, putting him in even more pain" use a full stop there.
  • "The episode is called this" --> "The episode received this name"
All done! Thanks @Igordebraga:! -Newyorkadam (talk) 01:16, 20 March 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam[reply]

I fixed the lead and Production, can you continue the review, @Hahc21:? igordebraga 13:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I will tonight. Thanks! → Call me Hahc21 19:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Okay. I took a look at the rest of the article and it all looks perfectly fine. I'm promoting. → Call me Hahc21 16:30, 25 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]