Talk:Taksin/GA2

GA Review

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I am reviewing the article. --Redtigerxyz (talk) 05:16, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 2 lacks page numbers
Bidyalongkarana book name not mentioned, the article does not have Notes and References section.
The books miss date of publication info.
Why is ref 83 used
The "Miscellaneous" trivia section must be merged in some other sections.
The two line short sections violate "The number of single-sentence paragraphs should be minimized," "Articles generally comprise paragraphs of running prose. Bullet points should be minimized in the body of the article" The bullet point lists should be converted to prose.

Good amount of amount of work needed in reference formatting and a re-write of the text is needed. FAIL--Redtigerxyz (talk) 05:34, 23 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]