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I've reverted recent edits to this article because of the large number of spelling errors and to try and keep to a NPOV, I realise that in doing so I might have inadvertantly removed some valid points, if so I'm sorry, please add them back (See the Manual of Style) --ericthefish 14:25, 9 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

IMHO, this article requires several corrections and cleanup. It does read like sections of a commercial brochure, does not conform to a NPOV and language standards can definitely be polished --81.241.250.26 13:06, 3 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]


Advertising + using bullet listings to make an article

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I cannot ascertain whether this article was made by means of the "copy and paste" technique. What is crystal clear to me is that this entry is not informative, does not respect the basics of wikipedia's standards and, furthermore, contains such a myriad of attempts against this encyclopedia's conventions.

Assertions such as There are so many shops (...) More than 20 Shops all arround the park do not help in stimulating trust of wikipedia's readers. Finally, I'd simply like to point out that this reads as clean advertisement.

I'm sorry for not improving this article to a standard that would be preffered. Please edit this article and change/polish the language.

Shows

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We have notable rides why can't we have notable shows.

Disability

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"33% disability" is not a phrase that makes sense to me and furthermore, is almost certainly offensive. Clarification should be sort.