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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:18, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:18, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:41, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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  • in a 14-year career in the Football League It may be helpful to give the years he was active in a (x–y) form here. Something similar may look good near a seven-year international career.
  • You can add "Irish club" before "Glentoran" as you have done for Waterford.
  • distinctive appearance of pale skin and bright ginger hair and sideburns Maybe shorten this to "distinctive pale skin, bright ginger hair and sideburns"? (Also in "Style of play")
  • Does "insurance" need a link? (Also in "Personal life")
Ireland
Stoke City
Later career
International career
Style of play
Personal life
Honours

No copyvio detected. Will check sources later. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:26, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

OK, thank you for the comments. I have found them useful.--EchetusXe 20:47, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, done with the above issues. Moving on to sources: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:19, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Assuming good faith for offline inaccessible sources.
  • Page ranges for refs 1 and 11?
  • I expect each point in the infobox is sourced, there or somewhere else in the article?
  • A note on the top of the section "International" saying ref 7 supports everything in it would be helpful, as in the preceding section.
  • It is better to name the publisher properly whenever you can, instead of using the website name. For example, you can say Rec.Sport.Soccer Statistics Foundation instead of rsssf.com (ref 59)

Great, can be promoted now. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:48, 11 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]