Talk:That Should Be Me/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: CallMeNathanTalk2Me 00:38, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Lead[edit]

  • Most music critics positively received the song, and it debuted -> there has to be some kind of connector to these totally opposite things.
Both are reception.
  • after the release of My World 2.0. -> following the release
 Done Candyo32 14:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Background[edit]

  • The mix was assisted by Christian Plata and Erik Madrid. Atweh and Luke Boyd perform background vocals on the song. -> try and tie this into one flowing sentence
 Done
  • Described as a "sobbing" ballad -> by who?
 Done Candyo32 14:44, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Reception[edit]

  • RChris Richards -> typo?
 Done
  • "That Should Be Me" also appeared on the UK Singles Chart at number 179 -> source? Also for Billboard source
 Done

Music video[edit]

  • who is playing the keyboard. Bieber then sings his lines, playing guitar -> inconsistent
How so? [Bieber] comes before who. What other wording would you suggest?
  • The woman who directed the band into the studio now directs them and Bieber into another room with lights, to film the video. -> I'm pretty sure its Bieber's mother
1:09-1:15 is definitely not this woman. Candyo32 13:39, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

Source queries[edit]

  • 3 -> publisher?
Publisher is listed. Not linked because it is the same link for the work.
  • 6 -> publisher?
Washington Post published by the Washington Post Company, and I've been told in FL procedures that in such cases only the work should be noted.
  • 9 -> over-link
 Done
  • What makes 10 and 12 reliable?
No thread about their reliability, but I have used HitFix numerous times in my own GA's, and TVbytheNumbers/Zap2it is heavily used in television articles. Candyo32 13:44, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
  • 14 again over-link
Can't unlink myself as it is the singlechart template. Candyo32 13:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
    • Nice job, sorry again for the 3-week delay, had some extra issues on Wiki that prevented some immediate editing. You have 1 days to make these fixes....Lol, take you time ;)--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 18:42, 30 May 2011 (UTC)