Talk:The Boat Race 1991/GA1

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 13:30, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

Take this one too.

  • "Cambridge saw Staite, Pooley and Wright return, while Oxford welcomed Young, Maclennan, Pinsent and Obholzer", add first names of all except Young here
    Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:48, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
  • "were almost a length up after two-and-a-half minutes", don't think this should be all hyphenated
    I'm trying to be internally consistent. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:48, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
    • Fair enough
  • "Michels shouting "see you at the finish" as his boat pulled away from Cambridge, Jo Michels", swap the bits in bold around. I think that whole sentence could be rephrased
    Rephrased. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:48, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Remove 'Women's Boat Race' wikilink under Race section
    Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:48, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

No dead links or dabs. Will pass once comments have been addressed. Lemonade51 (talk) 13:30, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

Thanks, responded in line. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:48, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
OK, meets the criteria and will pass this. Lemonade51 (talk) 14:01, 14 August 2014 (UTC)