Talk:The Itchy & Scratchy Show/GA1
GA Review
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Excellent work! I made a few minor changes, and there's just a few little quibbles before this can be passed:
- Is it necessary to state the season and year of the episode in paretheses afterwards?
- I believe it is. The Simpsons has been on 20 years, and mentioning a bunch of episodes without explaining the year it aired can be confusing for non-fans. I feel that having the season and the year in the text helps clear things up. This is done in several other Simpsons character articles, eg. Homer Simpson.
- What is the purpose of the The Itchy & Scratchy Show heading? The whole article is that...
- I felt it was important to sort the characters into two categories: Characters that are fictional within the Simpsons universe ("The Itchy & Scratchy Show") and characters that are "real" within the Simpsons universe ("Production staff"). That was the best title I could think of. Do you have any suggestions?
- Unfortunately not. It'll have to do. Majorly talk 19:15, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
- I felt it was important to sort the characters into two categories: Characters that are fictional within the Simpsons universe ("The Itchy & Scratchy Show") and characters that are "real" within the Simpsons universe ("Production staff"). That was the best title I could think of. Do you have any suggestions?
- This sentence: "but in reality both Itchy & Scratchy are voiced by men..." Should it not use "and" instead of the ampersand? Surely the ampersand is there for the purposes of the show, not when referring to the characters? This also occurs in the Merchandising section.
- Done.
Once you've sorted these, let me know, and I'll pass it. Thanks, Majorly talk 19:03, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. -- Scorpion0422 19:13, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
- OK, passed. Majorly talk 19:15, 23 January 2009 (UTC)