Talk:Thinkin Bout You (Frank Ocean song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 02:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox
[edit]- Information is needed in the article to verify that "quiet storm" is one of the genres of the song
You're right, I've removed it.
Lead
[edit]- ...just out of his reach and the turmoil that brings... → Change "brings" to "ensues"
Done
- ...video directed by visual art group High5Collective released on September 15... → Specify year this occurred
Done
- Ocean performed Ocean performed the track during his seven show tour... → Get rid of the first "Ocean performed"
Copy editing error, done.
Background
[edit]- At a listening part in 2012, it was confirmed that the track would appear on Ocean's Channel Orange.[6] → Change "part" to "party"
Composition
[edit]- According to WP:SAMPLE, audio recordings have to be less than 10% of the original recording (it needs to be less than 20.1 seconds and is currently 25 seconds)
Reception
[edit]- No issues
Promotion
[edit]- No issues
Chart
[edit]- Fix the table so that it is closed
Done?
References
[edit]- References 3, 6, 8 → Put publisher in
- Reference 5 → "iTunes Store" needs to be wiki-linked and should not be italicized
- References 10, 25 → "MTV" should not be italicized
- References 20, 21 → "Rolling Stone" and "Wenner Media" should not be italicized
- Reference 26 → "Billboard" and "Prometheus Global Media"
All done?
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. There are some minor prose issues and reference formatting errors that are keeping this article from reaching good article status. I will give you the general days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues you believe do not affect good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 (talk2me) 03:05, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
- Since all of the issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work! Rp0211 (talk2me) 05:01, 23 June 2012 (UTC)