Talk:Through the Rain/GA1
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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk) 03:04, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- One dead link, need to fix it.
Lead
- "She debuted the song at the 2002 NRJ Awards, and was aired three days later on a one hour special titled Mariah Carey: Shining Through the Rain". This is confusing... The peformance of the awards was aired on the special or she sang the song on the special?
- Yes that does read weird. Fixed!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:34, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
Music video
- Background: "new York City" -> "New York City", add also wikilink.
- Synopsis: "As she continues singing ad walking down the street," -> "As she continues singing and walking down the street,"
- Synopsis: "the girls mother" -> "the girl's mother"
Live performances
- "On December 2, Carey traveled to Brazil". The reference says she taped the performance on December 4.
- "On December 3, 2002, Carey appeared on The Oprah Winfrey Show, where she performed "Through the Rain" and "My Saving Grace"". The source doesn't say anything about a performance on the show. Do you have another source?
- Added a new one.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:34, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
Personal comments: Oh my God, this is unbelievable! I just read this article like two or three months ago, and I would never imagine someone would expand it so much as you did. I know I couldn't. Plus, I had no idea about Carey's situation on 2001/2002! I have always listened to her songs and loved her, but I was like 6 or 7 years at that time, so I didn't knew about any of this... Congrats, Nathan, you really rocked with this article! - Sauloviegas (talk) 21:05, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you Saul :) I really try to incorporate as much important information as possible! Yup, it was a pretty rough period in her life, and this song was her anthem for herself and fans after her return to music. Its one of my favorites from her :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:34, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
- You're welcome, pal! :) This song is pretty amazing, and it's one of my favorites too. Congrats, the article is now a GA. I'm still shocked with all the work you did. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 23:08, 29 August 2011 (UTC)