Talk:Thyrocare

This page should not be speedy deleted because...

This page should not be speedily deleted because... (your reason here) --106.209.233.93 (talk) 16:07, 3 September 2016 (UTC)

I am working on it and the work is still going on. I have enough data for this article and have also found valid references.

Please do help to make it happen.

Thank you!

@Vijay.pashte: Sure, I've removed the speedy deletion tag for now. However, the question is more about the how the article is written- it reads like a company website. jcc (tea and biscuits) 16:13, 3 September 2016 (UTC)

@Jcc: Thank you for removing speedy deletion tag of Thyrocare page. Yes, I completely agree that the article looks like its a company website. I shall edit the article and will post it again. I have enough information about this company however, need to present it in proper form. I would require your guidance for the same.

Thanks!

This page is created... (your reason here) --106.209.233.93 (talk) 18:27, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

@Jcc: I have rewritten the content of Thyrocare page and uploaded it. However, it is still showing that this article has multiple issues. Kindly guide to improve this article. Thank you.

Created Thyrocare page...

We have done with content and created this page.

Please remove unnecessary errors and suggest any changes required.

Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vijay.pashte (talk • contribs) 12:57, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

@Jcc: Hi Jcc, Thanks a lot for your guidelines to improve this article. I will definitely work on this and make the changes.

Best wishes, Vijay

A quick few thoughts

Hi Vijay,

Thanks for working on the article. Here's a few more thoughts, and what you can do to get the multiple issues tag removed from the top of the page.

The tags says "The neutrality of this article is disputed" and "This article may require copy editing for grammar, style, cohesion, tone, or spelling." What you need to do to remove these is to read through the article and get rid of phrases that are flattering and biased towards the company. I will give a few examples.

"Thyrocare pumped the investments into a new venture in molecular imaging to have its owns subsidiary, Nueclear Healthcare Limited. Nueclear Healthcare offers nuclear imaging services at low cost through use of advanced PET-CT scans for detection and location of cancerous cells along with staging of different cancers."

This is an example of biased, company website style text. You could alternatively phrases it as "Nueclear Healthcare Limited is a wholly owned subsidiary of Thyrocare created in 2013 that uses PET-CT scans to detect and locate cancerous cells"

"In April 2016, Thyrocare made its Initial Public Offering (IPO) and witnessed a massive demand even on its 3rd day of IPO"

Phrases such as "massive demand" are inappropriate. The sentence should just say "In April 2016, Thyrocare made its Initial Public Offering (IPO)."

"The company’s geographic presence extends to 483 cities across 27 states and 1 union territory in India, along with international presence in Nepal, Bangladesh and the Middle East."

could be rephrased as "The company is wide spread across India, and also works in Nepal, Bangladesh and the Middle East."

Best wishes, jcc (tea and biscuits) 21:50, 30 September 2016 (UTC)

The suggested changes implemented

@Jcc: Hi Jcc, I have edited the content of this article as suggested by you. Please review the information help to improve the article.

Thank you.

Right, I've removed some unimportant sections, and I think that in my view its suitably neutral enough. Thanks for your edits! jcc (tea and biscuits) 16:39, 11 October 2016 (UTC)

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Thyrocare New Logo is changes

Dear Team,

This is to inform you that Thyrocare has officially changes their logo, which needs to be updated. I Tied to upload multiple times but was not able to change Check logo URL: https://www.thyrocare.com/NewAssets/img/thyrocare.png — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chiranjeevitb (talk • contribs) 06:19, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

@JCC can you help to change new Thyrocare Logo?

I Tried but was not able to do the same. Chiranjeevitb (talk) 05:38, 2 June 2022 (UTC)