Talk:Tony Okanlawon/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• added cat Players of American football from Maryland  Done
• "In the season finale of the 1999" fix grammar  Done
  • Done.
• Do you know if there is a link for source one or is it offline?  Done
  • Added links for each offline source.
• "He started eleven games in as a junior" fix grammar  Done
  • Done.
• "and by the end of week five had" comma after five  Done
  • Added.
• "Okanlawon missed four games due to a "medical issue" which coach" comma after issue  Done
  • Done.
• Add first team all acc to the infobox  Done
  • Added.
• According to ArenaFan, he was signed on jan 5 and waived on jan 17?  Done
  • Could you provide a link?
    • sry [1] WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:53, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
      • @WikiOriginal-9: Added. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:35, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
• Lagos, Nigeria is linked differently in the infobox and article. Should probably be consistent.  Done
  • Made consistent.
• Could you find anything on his life after football? Maybe he has a linkedin page, lol.  Done
  • Does actually have a LinkedIn page, though there's nothing useful on it. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:14, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:27, 26 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC)