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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Qualification

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  • Could you clarify what an NOC is?
  • "If an athlete had already qualified through another method the NOC didn't receive another quota with it instead going to the next NOC on the ITU Olympic Qualification List." - did not
  • Delink the continents per WP:OVERLINK
  • Spell out the ITU on the first instance and leave the acroymn in brackets
  • The Great Britain wikilink should be to Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics and not to the island

Course

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  • Add adj=on to the convert template for 1.5 kilometres (0.93 mi), 43 kilometres (27 mi), 6.137 kilometres (3.813 mi) and 2.5 kilometres (1.6 mi)
  • "one big lap." - unencyclopedic
  • "The course then quickly left Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill." - The course then quickly turned left towards Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill

References

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That is all I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:29, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for your review, I have implemented all of your points. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 08:56, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Good work. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:37, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]