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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC) I will review more fully tomorrow, but for starters, here has more information. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:23, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"On the mainland of Mexico, the outerbands" wikilink to rainband. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Please use TWO's in the MH.

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

What was Dallia's forecast peak? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Done--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

When the the NHC re-assess the intensity of the storm to say 45 knots? the MH is a bit short for a very recent storm that was not /that/ short-lived. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

What are you asking me to do here?--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

How close did it comer to Socorro Island. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Oops, I said it in the lede but not the MH.--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, causing weakening and disorganization of the cloud pattern.[5] " to "began entering a region of colder sea surface temperatures, resulting in weakening as the cloud pattern became less organized.[5] " Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Why was Dallia declared a remnant low? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Change the "Impact" header to "Impact and aftermath". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports of deaths or damage.[1] " to "Although Dalila passed over Socorro Island with winds of 60 mph (95 km/h), there were no reports any deaths or damage.[1] "

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"As the storm weakened, it produced rough seas and heavy rains over parts of Baja California Sur.[7] " mention this towards the end of the impact Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 17:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Any red/green/blue alerts for MX (the above link in the start of the review should have that)? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

There were some blue alerts, according to one of the newspaper articles.--12george1 (talk) 03:38, 4 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Where in particular (what cites were there impact). Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Nope, I couldn't find that out--12george1 (talk) 03:39, 4 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Any damage total? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Nope--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Link to newspapers in refs if applicable. 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

Fixed--12george1 (talk) 18:44, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ill find you more impact links later. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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