Talk:Tropical Storm Josephine (1996)/GA1

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 13:43, 7 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to review this. Expect initial comments soon, ★★Retro Lord ★★ 13:43, 7 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, just curious if you forgot about this. :) Hurricanehink mobile (talk) 23:45, 12 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Whoops, will do this now. Sorry, ★★Retro Lord ★★ 03:52, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Some points,

In these articles do you usually cite the stuff in the infobox? ★★Retro Lord ★★ 04:57, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Not usually. The infobox info is derived from the article itself. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 13:24, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

For the first paragraph in meteorological history, it is entirely sourced from "Tropical Storm Josephine Preliminary Report" apart fromt the last sentence? ★★Retro Lord ★★ 04:57, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

That is correct. It's all from the tropical cyclone report, up to the second to last sentence. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 13:24, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Images and stability are ok also, NPOV seems ok, OR seems ok, Doesn't seem to be any undue weight or excessive detail anywhere. A good article no doubt, expect me to pass this soon. Thanks, ★★Retro Lord ★★ 04:57, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 13:24, 13 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]