Talk:Tyler Thigpen/GA2
GA Reassessment
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This article isn't of GA quality, in fact it never really gotten a good review as well, it was quickly passed with not one concern what so ever so this should be quickly delisted. Some of the more obvious concerns.
- Heavy linkrot with more than 50% of the links dead links.
- What makes Potencial.com a reliable source, [1] this despite being part of scout.com it is a fan blog from the website.
- So many citations in the lead itself on basic fact, which is highly frowned upon in the WP:MOS
- Fan language thoughout "to play to the best of their abilities"
- Also massive grammar issues "Thigpen played in the fourth quarter and in two possessions with the Vikings offense and completed 3-of-6 passes for 29 yards and picked up 18 yards on two scrambles" As a obvious example, there's many more like it.
- Exposing Thigpen to waivers was a calculated risk by the Vikings and one that was considered to likely not turn in their favor" Fails WP:NPOV, not to mention it's a straight copy and paste from the source without even bothering to change the words around, needs a good check for close paraphrasing concerns.
- By changing the gameplan, the Chiefs' offense began to find an identity after swapping their power running game for spread-type formations that best suited Thigpen. Obvious WP:NPOV violation, source is a dead link.
- "Head coach Herman Edwards, who has long had a reputation for favoring more conservative, run-oriented offenses, began seeing his team gain confidence with every game it played in that wide-open system" Another direct word by word from the source, hell I'm delisting this immediately, this article needs to be rewritten from scratch because of the copyvio concerns. Secret account 04:24, 20 September 2012 (UTC)