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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 22:36, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one tonight/tomorrow. Courcelles (talk) 22:36, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Charlotte continued to rapidly strengthened" Don't need the "ed" on strengthen here.
  • The typhoon's acceleration soon slowed down to 3–4 knots" Not sure you mean "acceleration" here, perhaps "movement" or "speed"?
  • "Charlotte traveled 64 kilometers" Again, traveled? Or "was located"?
  • Changed to "was located".
  • "where little damage has happened." Watch the tenses.
  • "The landslide in Ōgimi killed seven people and injured four, and 18 people were killed and four were injured when 30 feet (9.1 m) of debris buried their houses in Tagazako. " Only one number format per sentence.
  • " were flooded under 5 feet (1.5 m)." I know it's bloody obvious, but we need "of water" or something to finish that sentence.
  • "The total cost for the damage of the military installations was $300,000." Use the tmeplates to convert this into the equivalent in modern US Dollars.
  • IS File:US military bases in Okinawa.svg the military bases then or now?

Courcelles (talk) 23:06, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Thanks for the review.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:56, 19 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]