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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I will be doing the review now. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Link Japan in the lead. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"and after an increase in thunderstorm activity, and on August 3, a tropical depression developed" Needs a slight adjustment. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Better? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"After tracking near Guam, Janis tracked generally westward" I would replace one of the tracks. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Changed the first. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Kyushu is linked three times in the lead. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Whoops, fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

There is an inconsistency with numbers in the lead. Some two digit numbers are spelled out, while others are in numerical form. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've explained this to you before. I spell them out if there's a as many or more single digit numbers in the sentence or it's the first word of the sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Abbreviate acres and link to both measurements as people may be unfamiliar with them. Noah^Talk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That's literally the abbreviation of acres in the template. As for the links, I don't wikilink any other units so... Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"the JMA classified Janis into a severe tropical storm." should be 'as a STS'. Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, good catch. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Kyushu is linked twice in the MH. Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Jannis brought winds gusting to 55 km/h (35 mph) and 64 mm (2.25 in) of rain in 24 hours to the island" which island? Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Should be clear by the header :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"total occurred of 468 mm (18.4 in) at Nagaoka District." A bit jumbled here. Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Abbreviate acres throughout the Japan section. Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

They literally already are. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Please watch significant figures when converting from hectares to acres. For example, 7000 ha should convert to 20,000 ac. Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, here you may have a point in theory but rounding to the nearest 10K acre does not seem precise. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"including Susaki, suffered a blackout after falling tress" Spelling. Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Fukuoka Prefecture, including by three by falling glass" delete the first "by".

Fixed, along with a blatant grammar error in the same sentence. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Also have variations in numbers throughout the Japan section. There is a mix of word and numerical values for numbers 99 and lower.

Already explained. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lastly, I noticed that the article has both "canceled" and "cancelled". Noah^Talk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 22:53, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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