Talk:Typhoon Thelma (1987)/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 00:43, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, YE. I'll be reviewing this article before I start drinking :P --12george1 (talk) 00:43, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"It also turned sharply northward in response, slowly weakening." - In response to what?
- Wikileaks. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:22, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"In Japan, the typhoon brought heavy rains that was responsible for property damage in 19 states." - You should refer to those "states" as prefectures. Btw, shouldn't "was" be "were"?
- Perfect, did both. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:22, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"Considered by the media to be the worst typhoon to hit South Korea in 28 typhoon seasons, Thelma brought widespread damage throughout the nation." - Why not just say 28 years?
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:22, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"the Korean government agreed to provide $237 million in aid." - I think you should say the South Korean government, unless for some weird reason North Korea provided aid too :P
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:22, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"It then weakened rapidly while moving northeastwards across Korea. Early on July 16" - Since Korea doesn't exist, replace that with the Korean Peninsula
- Done

That should be it. Good luck in the WikiCup.--12george1 (talk) 00:43, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, that was quick. I'm gonna pass this article.--12george1 (talk) 01:26, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]