Talk:Tyson Jost/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:02, 19 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Link British Columbia in the lead. Done
No need to relink St. Albert in the early life section. Done
No need to write out Canada, already implied by city and province. Done
Lower caps for colour. Done
"the Everett Silvertips 7th overall" Add "at" after Silvertips. Done
Ref 5 has an author. Done
You should add the BCHL acronym after the first time you mention it, so you can use the acronym for all mentions of the league afterwards. Done

~~Any details on his time with UND?~~ Season results and (conference) awards at least?
I should've kept reading on.
UND's loss to Boston U in the tournament should be mentioned before saying he left the school. Done

Avoid starting consecutive sentences with the same word. Done
Ref 20 missing an author. Done
Publisher needed for ref 22. Done
"After attending the Avalanche's training camp, Jost was named to their opening night roster to begin the 2019–20 season." Maybe reword this so it doesn't look like the same sentence from the paragraph above. Done
Ref 31 needs a publisher. Done
His World Challenge MVP is worth mentioning. Done
Ref 36 needs a publisher. Done
Ref 37 is dead. Done
Ref 40 has an agency you can add to the template. Done
North Dakota Fighting Hawks can be written out on the stats section. Done
Reference column of the awards table needs a name. Done
Optional, but you can make ref 1's title not in all-caps. Done
Mention something in the lead about his professional career. Done

Nova Crystallis, thanks for the review. I hope I've addressed all the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:55, 20 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]