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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:39, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Overall this article is good, though I found a few issues:

  • There's no copyright tag on the image. (though it's obviously fair use since there's a rationale)
  • I think splitting the relationship with his lieutenant governor into its own paragraph would probably be a good idea.
  • In the paragraph with Bruce Wilkinson, I'd use Wallace's full name where the two are near each other so we know who's who.

I'll put the article on hold; just fix the couple small issues and I'll pass it. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:39, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

(removed my comments) Ehrichweiss (talk) 23:22, 10 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]