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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Kyle Peake, I will start my review now. LOVI33 03:29, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead[edit]

 Done for the above even though I had already set these credits properly before this edit switched things around --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Clemons and West had a conversation about Jesus, which the song came from" → "The song came from a conversation between Clemons and West about Jesus"
 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Background and recording[edit]

  • First paragraph is really long, maybe split it up into a few?
 Done how's that look? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics[edit]

  • Looks Good!

Release and promotion[edit]

  • No problems found, looks good!

Critical reception[edit]

  • Looks good!

Commercial performance[edit]

  • "entered at number 51 on the US Billboard Hot 100" → "entered the US Billboard Hot 100 at number 51"
  • "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the Hot 100" → "the track gave Clemons his first appearance on the chart"
 Done --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • Change title to just "Personnel," "Credits and personnel" is used when there are recording locations involved
Are you sure about this? I was thinking that stuff like "recording engineer", "associated performer" and "mastering engineer" makes it titled as of current? --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Okay fair enough, Keep it as is. LOVI33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Charts[edit]

  • Looks good!

Notes[edit]

  • Looks good!

References[edit]

  • ref 1 is a bare url, replace with a citation
 Not done I instead removed since it was added in the recent edit that changed the infobox --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

External links[edit]

  • Looks good!

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold for now. Just a few small changes and I will promote it to GA. Amazing work on the article by the way. LOVI33 04:06, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    LOVI33 Have made proper fixes for the changes apart from that one. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:14, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    Kyle Peake, Okay thats a ✓ Pass. LOVI33 13:37, 3 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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