Talk:White-headed fruit dove/GA1
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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 09:20, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
Hi again!
- specific name – link; I also would repeat "eugeniae" to make immediately clear what the term is referring to.
- Done.
- Other names for the species include Eugenie's fruit dove. – "Another name for the species is" because it is only a single one?
- Done.
- Southeast Asia and Oceania – why link Southeast Asia but not Oceania?
- Added link.
- sister – link at first mention
- Done.
- subspecies –link?
- Done.
- Optional: the taxonomy section is very technical, and you would help readers to explain the terms most central for understanding in a gloss (brackets). E.g. "conspecifics (of the same species)"
- Added glosses
- also link taxonomy?
- Done.
- The image seems to be historical; include caption with author & year?
- Done.
- the second note is a longer (around 0.5 seconds long) and more emphasised. – a longer what?
- Removed "a".
- Ref #3 lacks title and author.
- Added author, but there isn't really a title beyond that for the book, since the section in which the species is described doesn't have its own title.
- This seems to be a journal, and your current title is in fact the name of the journal, and "Zoological Society of London" is the publisher of the journal. Since it is a journal, you should use the "cite journal" template rather than the "cite book" template. According to the table of contents, the title of the paper within the journal (i.e., your cite) is "On some Birds collected by Mr. John MacGillivray, the Naturalist attached to H. M. Surveying Ship Rattlesnake, and lately sent home by Capt. Denham, the Commander of the Expedition". --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:57, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- Okay, done. AryKun (talk) 05:17, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
- This seems to be a journal, and your current title is in fact the name of the journal, and "Zoological Society of London" is the publisher of the journal. Since it is a journal, you should use the "cite journal" template rather than the "cite book" template. According to the table of contents, the title of the paper within the journal (i.e., your cite) is "On some Birds collected by Mr. John MacGillivray, the Naturalist attached to H. M. Surveying Ship Rattlesnake, and lately sent home by Capt. Denham, the Commander of the Expedition". --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:57, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
- This is all, solid article as usual. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 09:51, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing, I think I've addressed all of your concerns. AryKun (talk) 13:30, 30 January 2022 (UTC)