Talk:World of Darkness (video game)/GA1
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 20:38, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
- Is "This article is about the canceled online video game. For the 2017 interactive fiction video games, see World of Darkness Preludes: Vampire and Mage" is really needed ? at the top of the page ? I'm not so sure. --Archimëa (talk) 13:14, 17 November 2019 (UTC)
- I think it's fine.
- Layed -> Laid
- Make sure to keep the tense consistent; for instance, in the same sentence it's said that IGN had both called it something and was calling it something.
Otherwise, it seems fine. I was too lazy to put up the template I usually do and didn't notice till now. Hope that's fine lol. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 15:36, 17 November 2019 (UTC)
- @Abryn: Wow, I didn't realize it would go through the review process this quickly. I see you already passed it, but I would still like to fix the problems with tense... but I can't find where the problem is, would you mind pointing it out (or if it's a small edit, maybe it's easier if you do it directly)? --Alexandra IDVtalk 16:41, 17 November 2019 (UTC)