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Reviewer: Sasata (talk) 19:18, 24 March 2010 (UTC) Hi, I'll be reviewing this article. Comments in a day or 2. Sasata (talk) 19:18, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
Excellent work as usual. Just a few comments:
- wlink/wikt link for reticulations in the lead
- Done
- should Urolophus jamaicensis be put as a synonym in the taxobox?
- My own policy is to only include original combinations in the synonyms box
- "…and inserts a single claspers into her cloaca." clasper or claspers?
- Fixed
- any lifespan info?
- Added
- anything worthwhile to add from the following?
- Title: A Unique Vascular Configuration among the Efferent Branchial Arteries and Splanchnic Arteries in the Yellow Stingray, Urobatis jamaicensis
- Author(s): Basten, BL; Sherman, RL; Lametschwandtner, A, et al.
- Source: MICROSCOPY AND MICROANALYSIS Volume: 15 Issue: 3 Pages: 194-196 Published: 2009
- Title: Evoked potential audiograms of the nurse shark (Ginglymostoma cirratum) and the yellow stingray (Urobatis jamaicensis)
- Author(s): Casper, BM; Mann, DA
- Source: ENVIRONMENTAL BIOLOGY OF FISHES Volume: 76 Issue: 1 Pages: 101-108 Published: MAY 2006
- Title: Gross brain morphology in the yellow stingray, Urobatis jamaicensis
- Author(s): Walker, Brian K.; Sherman, Robin L.
- Source: Florida Scientist Volume: 64 Issue: 4 Pages: 246-249 Published: Autumn, 2001
- I added brief notes about the hearing threshold and the brain size; the circulatory system info is probably too esoteric for the general reader (and for me).
Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 18:22, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
- All GA criteria are met or exceeded. Sasata (talk) 18:40, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks! -- Yzx (talk) 19:12, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
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