Talk:You're on Your Own, Kid/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Unlimitedlead (talk · contribs) 21:38, 27 March 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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First of all, I'd like to say that I love this song. I hope she plays it when I go the Eras Tour in April! Comments and review to follow within the next few days; I will be finished by 7 April, although I highly doubt it will take that long. Thank you for your patience (this is my second GA review). Unlimitedlead (talk) 21:38, 27 March 2023 (UTC)

@Ippantekina Just letting you know that this review has started. Apologies for not pinging you sooner. Unlimitedlead (talk) 02:32, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Lead

• "social image and self-image" is not mentioned in the article, so it should not be in the lead. You can either remove it or add said information to the article accompanied with citations.

Background and release

• "On August 28, 2022, during singer-songwriter Taylor Swift acceptance speech for Video of the Year..." --> "On August 28, 2022, during singer-songwriter Taylor Swift's acceptance speech for Video of the Year..."
• "release date for October 21" Can you rephrase this? I think it sounds strange.
• "Jack Antonoff, a musician who has worked with Swift since 1989 (2014)...": I suggest something like "Jack Antonoff, a musician who has worked with Swift since her fifth studio album 1989 (2014)..."

Composition and lyrics

• ""You're on Your Own, Kid" is 3:14 in length" Can we have this in words?
• production as " '90s-alt-rock-tigned": Strange punctuation situation here.
• Introduce Rob Sheffield.

@Ippantekina: Nice. Please see to it that these comments are adressed; then we should be good to go. Unlimitedlead (talk) 19:21, 2 April 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Unlimitedlead. I believe all are addressed now. Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 10:46, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

Great. I will pass this nomination. Now if only I remembered how to do that... Unlimitedlead (talk) 12:48, 3 April 2023 (UTC)