Template talk:Did you know nominations/Shireen Abu Akleh

Original hook

Hi Thriley, the original hook is longer than expected. Per Wikipedia:Did you know/Hook length it should be lower than 200 characters. You may try something like this:

*...that Palestinian American journalist Shireen Abu Akleh was fatally shot despite wearing a blue vest with "PRESS" written on it while covering a raid by the Israel Defense Forces in the West Bank?

Mhhossein ^talk 06:14, 27 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Nableezy: I think it would be better if we keep on the discussions here; How is the following?

...according to investigations by independent press agencies, journalist Shireen Abu Akleh (her death protest pictured) was killed by an Israel Defense Forces bullet while wearing a blue "PRESS" vest? --Mhhossein ^talk 14:48, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sure. nableezy - 03:37, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the reply @Nableezy, but I am afraid, does it mean you're happy with the hook? Mhhossein ^talk 14:37, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, thats fine with me. nableezy - 15:17, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]