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• Name of article: Liu Bei
• Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate: With the success of pc game Total War: Three Kingdoms, it attracted many gamers to enter the most interesting period of ancient China.  Liu Bei was a main character in the game campaign and historically he was a descendant of the declining royal family, became the founding emperor of the Shu Han, and soon extended the Han Dynasty.  His entire life was a legendency, so I want to make sure that when people that are not-Chinese trying to approach the chinese culture, they get what is correct.

Lead evaluation

The lead is correct with the most information; however, it does not have brief description of the article's major sections. In common, whenever there's biography introduction of an emperor, it should contains lots of information about its entire life. In the lead section, there are lots of main events of Liu Bei's life time were not stated. It is too broad, and not showing the legendency of Liu Bei.

Adding the reason why Liu Bei was a offspring of the royal family, but he didn't even survive.

Adding the main events of Liu Bei's life and stated the changes after those happened.

Content evaluation

There were some mistake stated in the content and should be corrected.

Tone and balance evaluation

The article is neutral since it was a biography. It is unnecessary to have section 12 into the article since it does not have any relevance toward Liu Bei himself. General worship of Liu Bei

Sources and references evaluation

Sources are fine and the links are worked.

Organization evaluation

The article was organized with life time of Liu Bei and read easily. The structure of the article should be organized. For example, putting major events list in the middle of the article.

Images and media evaluation

The images are good, but someplace may cause of a sense of abruptness and disharmony.

Talk page evaluation

The article has been listed as a level-5 vital article in People, Politicians, and is part of In the talk pages, there are discussions and opinions are about facts and corrections. This article is within the scope of WikiProject China, WikiProject Three Kingdom, Military history WikiProject and WikiProject Biography.

Overall evaluation

Overall is score 7 out of 10 for me, and there has lots place can improve with more event facts.