User:Abbeyperrin/Evaluate an Article

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Evaluate an article[edit]

This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.

  • Name of article: (link) 5 Seconds of Summer, Paul's Case
  • Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate.
    • I have a lot of information about this band so I am able to make comments and evaluate the information on this topic.
    • It is a short stor we read in class.

Lead[edit]

Guiding questions
  • Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
    • Yes
    • Yes
  • Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
    • Yes
    • Yes
  • Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
    • No
    • No
  • Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
    • Concise
    • Concise

Lead evaluation[edit]

Content[edit]

Guiding questions
  • Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
    • Yes
    • Yes
  • Is the content up-to-date?
    • Yes
    • Yes
  • Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
    • No
    • No

Content evaluation[edit]

Tone and Balance[edit]

Guiding questions
  • Is the article neutral?
    • Yes
    • To me yes, but it says on the page that the neutrality of the article is currently being disputed.
  • Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
    • No
    • No
  • Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
    • No
    • No
  • Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
    • No
    • The article makes it seem that Paul's relationship with his father is in fact abuse, when it was never confirmed.

Tone and balance evaluation[edit]

Sources and References[edit]

Guiding questions
  • Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
    • Yes
    • Yes
  • Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
    • Yes
    • Yes
  • Are the sources current?
    • Yes
    • Some are current but most are older.
  • Check a few links. Do they work?
    • Yes
    • Yes

Sources and references evaluation[edit]

Organization[edit]

Guiding questions
  • Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
    • Yes
    • Mostly, but the writing is almost too concise and short.
  • Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?
    • No
    • No
  • Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
    • Yes
    • Yes

Organization evaluation[edit]

Images and Media[edit]

Guiding questions
  • Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
    • Yes
    • No
  • Are images well-captioned?
    • Yes
    • N/A
  • Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
    • No, the picture with each of their photos has no source.
    • N/A
  • Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
    • Yes
    • N/A

Images and media evaluation[edit]

Checking the talk page[edit]

Guiding questions
  • What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
    • There are no conversations, just nominations for things to be deleted.
    • There are a lot of discussions, specifically about adding new sections and or deleting some.
  • How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
    • It's rated C-class and low importance. It is a part of WikiProject Biography/Musicians, Australia/Music, and Pop and Rock Music.
    • It's rated at start-class and some low importance. It's a part of the Short Story WikiProject as well as LGBT studies and Women writers.
  • How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
    • Wikipedia agrees with most of the theories we've discussed, but seems to believe that Paul's relationship with his father is abusive.

Talk page evaluation[edit]

Overall impressions[edit]

Guiding questions
  • What is the article's overall status?
    • Overall the article is solid, not too lengthy but not too vague.
    • Overall the article has a few structural errors but has a good base to start with.
  • What are the article's strengths?
    • The article has a lot of information about the band's start.
    • The article has a solid plot summary and symbolism section.
  • How can the article be improved?
    • It could have more detail about the band's new album release.
    • The article can restructure their sections as well as make more sections.
  • How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?
    • This article is well developed and complete, but could use a few more details.
    • This article is underdeveloped but once more information is added it could turn into a complete article.

Overall evaluation[edit]

Optional activity[edit]

  • Choose at least 1 question relevant to the article you're evaluating and leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback

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