User:Anjsan01/Milk frother/Carlematsu Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

I will be reviewing User: Anjsan01 sandbox draft about the Milk Frother

Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anjsan01/Milk_frother?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Milk frother

Evaluate the drafted changes

(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- The lead is good, it summarizes the content of the article well. I would include a little blurb in the lead about the different types of frothed milk that are mentioned in the body

- The intro sentence is great, it really summarizes the topic being discussed in a concise way

- Content is relevant to the topic being discussed and and up to date

- I think a section about the origins/history of the frother may be useful for context. Additionally I may helpful to mention recent trends in popularity for the differnt types of milk frothers. I think the section about "how it works" is great!

- Overall, the content is pretty full and includes a lot of relevant information

- Content is neutral. There is no bias or persuasion of one point of view. To make it a little more balanced maybe there could be section about recent critiques of the milk frother? I do not think this is necessary though.

- The references/sources are reliable and very up to date. The content within the article of the sandbox includes a lot of information that came from the references.

- I would use more literary or academic articles maybe? If there are more literary articles/journals about the way the frother works and the origins of the frother that would be great as opposed to the more blog type articles you have

- To find the history of the milk frother/mixer you may need to use more literary articles.

- The links to articles work

- Overall, this is a really great article so far! I think that there could be a small section about the history/origins of the frother and maybe some recent trends of popularity about the different types of frothing machines but I think that everything else is great! Additionally, I think it maybe useful to include a very small section about what kind of people usually use the frother (cafes, bakeries, etc) to give it a little more context. Additionally, usage of more literary articles/journals maybe useful in elaborating on the origins/history of the frother.

- There is definitely a lot of progress from the original draft. It is definitely more informative, especially with its mention of the types of milk it can froth and about how the machine itself works.