User:B.C.Schmerker/Article Prototype3/Source Amendments

I have found evidence of grammatic problems with the original article. The paragraph in question follows. - B.C.Schmerker 13:47, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

Original text from ja. Wikipedia.org:

元クラリオンガールの姉が持っていた麗美の写真が偶然関係者の目にとまり、1984年1月1日、松任谷正隆・由実夫妻の全面的バックアップでデビュー。1993年頃からREMEDIOSとしてドラマ・映画のサウンドトラック、CM音楽などを手がけるようになる。岩井俊二監督とコラボレーションすることが多く、作品とともに注目を集める。本名は堀川麗美。姉は作曲家のMAYUMI（堀川まゆみ）。

Typical translator 'bot output:

The photograph of the 麗 beauty which the older sister of the original clarion girl had stops accidentally in the eye of the authorized personnel, 1984 January 1st, with extensive backup of the correct Takashi Matutouya debuts reason actual husband and wife. It reaches the point where sound track and CM music etc of the drama movie are managed as REMEDIOS from around 1993. Iwai Syunji director and there are many times when collaboration it does, with the work attract attention. As for autonym Horikawa 麗 beauty. As for older sister sees MAYUMI of composer (Horikawa (ma)(yu)).

Alternate translation proposal:

A photograph of Reimy in the possession of the elder Horikawa (viz., the former Clarion Girl) caught the eye(s) of certain persons on January 1 1984, initiating M/M Masataka Matsutoya's full-scale backup debut; consequent management of film-soundtrack and CM music under the Remedios name commenced around 1993....

Known facts[edit]

Mayumi Horikawa is older sister to Reimy; whether a yet older sibling exists is unknown.
Both Masataka Matsutoya (松任谷正隆 Matutouya Masataka) and Yumi Matsutoya (松任谷由実 Matutouya Yumi) are actual persons with their own articles on ja.Wikipedia.org.

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